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Wednesday, 18 October 2017

OctPoWriMo Day 18: Everyone went on eating

Not hearing the sun in my voice
when you entered the room,
not seeing your eyes swimming
when I took off my jacket at lunch,
and not sensing our connection's dendrochronic rings
when our minds break open,
everyone went on eating.
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2 comments:

  1. Annis Cassells18 October 2017 at 14:45

    I love this, especially after I re-read it aloud. (In my head, I was in the wrong voice.) Then I could visualize the scene. Thank you. xoA

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  2. ms_lili19 October 2017 at 03:44

    i like the brevity of the words that say so much

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