Not hearing the sun in my voice
when you entered the room,
not seeing your eyes swimming
when I took off my jacket at lunch,
and not sensing our connection's dendrochronic rings
when our minds break open,
everyone went on eating.
First three Chapters....
15 years ago
2 comments:
I love this, especially after I re-read it aloud. (In my head, I was in the wrong voice.) Then I could visualize the scene. Thank you. xoA
i like the brevity of the words that say so much
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