Thursday, 11 October 2018

OctPoWriMo 2018! Day 11: falling through the cracks

We fell through life's cracks for so long,
you and I,
wandering darkly
through Platonic caves
and thinking,
believing ourselves to be
alone.

Suddenly a shaft of light showed us
the exit
up above us
and we then could germinate,
flowering
in each other's answered bliss.

7 comments:

ladyleemanila said...

awww, so lovely! :)

Unknown said...

Loved the Platonic cave line. Great poem Bianca!

BiancaP said...

Thanks for stopping by, and for your kind words, Sam!

paeansunplugged said...

This is wonderful!

BiancaP said...

Was not expecting such a positive response! Thank you, paeansunplugged!

Richa said...

Lovely!❤

BiancaP said...

Thank you, Richa!