Thursday 25 October 2018

OctPoWriMo 2018! Day 25: the door goes both ways

We longed for
that day when your office
door would lock from the inside. This is
what I wrote to you, or words to that effect. I
held my breath; pressed send. To which you said:
hope your heart opens from
the outside.

7 comments:

Morgan Dragonwillow said...

Love the last line. Nicely done.

BiancaP said...

Thank you! Always lovely when real life makes the poem for you :)

Sunita said...

Aww! This is lovely, I agree with Morgan. That last line is amazing.

Varadharajan said...

This is a microfiction disguised as a poem. Very well done indeed.

BiancaP said...

Merci!

paeansunplugged said...

This is so lovely!

BiancaP said...

ahhh thankies :)