Madness rains
down around us
and fades into blue.
Our own insanity
reigns, yet makes perfect
sense.
We take life's
reins, heliacally
mastering mania.
We barely
notice chaos;
I fade into you.
First three Chapters....
15 years ago
10 comments:
It's a good day when I have to look up the meaning of a new word.
Thank you! As it happens, I had to look it up myself. I knew the concept I was after but wasn't sure of the word for it :p
The last line is just perfect!
Ooooh YES SOMEONE USED HELIACAL <3 Also, I love the poem and especially the last line!
Thank you!
Excellent use of all the three prompts. Precise and punchy. Well done
Thanks - that's really kind :)
Very clever using all three meanings. Not sure I even got one.
I liked it a lot ..thank you ... sr
Merci à tous!
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